Sunday, May 30, 2010

Dreaming, War

The water flows freely,
The birds are singing happily,
Trees are like dancing.

Am I in heaven?
I see many wonderful places.
Oh! Wake up!

Well, actually it's a war.
The Japanese are attacking us.
I was dreaming.

Now I see sad faces,
Frightened because of Japanese.
Why do we suffer like this?

No one likes a war,
Causing death and fears.
I dare to die.

When will it over?
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3 comments :

  1. Apollo SapolloThursday, June 17, 2010 10:37:00 PM

    Assalammualaikum,

    Dunia ni akan sentiasa dipenuhi darah...sehingga akhir zaman yg kte tidak ketahui ble masa nye...

    GOOD!

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  2. Apollo SapolloThursday, June 17, 2010 11:31:00 PM

    ASSALAMMUALAIKUM,

    I HOPE YOU CAN FOLLOW MY BLOG...BECAUSE I CAN PUT UR BLOG IN TO MY PRIME BAR IN MY BLOG.UR POEM IS GOOD...

    TQ.

    ShazrilShaedi,PuncakAlam,Kuala selangor,Selangor,Malaysia.

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  3. mikuxxSunday, June 20, 2010 5:30:00 PM

    Thank you =)

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*tolong jangan guna kata-kata kasar.
*no harsh word please.

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